Ollie places two noodle boxes
from his favourite takeaway
on the kitchen bench,
Mongolian beef for Greta
and a Thai green chicken curry for himself;
he unscrews the cap of the sauvignon blanc,
pours two generous glasses,
he hands a glass to Greta,
“chin chin”, he says,
she smiles with quivering ruby lips.
The blue cat plays with Ollie’s pewter pen,
flicks it to the floor,
bleats and stares at Ollie.
Ollie hands Greta chopstcks
and the box with Mongolian beef,
“let’s not stand of ceremony,” he says.
Greta takes the box,
the cat’s jade eyes are fixed on her
as he knocks Ollie’s phone onto the floor.
Ollie picks up the phone,
pats his cat saying,
“thank you Blue, I get your drift,”
while feeding him a piece of chicken.
Greta’s slender fingers
prise open the top of the noodle box,
she sniffs with an nonchalant air,
but the tightness around her lips
speaks of agitation.
Ollie takes a deep breath
smiling at Blue,
he smells adrenaline,
beneath Greta’s sandalwood perfume;
the chopsticks in her right hand
betray an almost imperceptible tremor.
Ollie engages her in small talk
about the best places
for coffee in the city.
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July 9th, 2012 at 1:58 pm
Oh the beauty of words
As dangerous as they are
Doubly so in Slip Alley
Where your back is not covered
And $10,000 may cost you a life
July 9th, 2012 at 1:59 pm
Indeed
July 9th, 2012 at 8:03 pm
Mesmerizing, sensuous..blue cats with green eyes, the mouth-watering food…the details…I’m there!..I’m playing w. Blue, handing you the phone, watching the food, ppl. eating and wondering what the hell is next!!!
July 9th, 2012 at 8:45 pm
Oh, that is music to my poor ole ears – so pleased you are still with me and enjoying
July 9th, 2012 at 9:03 pm
interesting…this stands alone well and intimately paints a cool scene…your detail allows us to be right there in it as well…
July 9th, 2012 at 9:05 pm
Again thank you for sticking with my series
July 9th, 2012 at 9:20 pm
Making me hungry for a chinese…lol….another intriguing episode…I can feel Greta’s discomfort…love the blue cat
July 9th, 2012 at 9:34 pm
There has to be a cat – now I need to include a crow – lol
July 9th, 2012 at 11:14 pm
Chinese and Thai food! I cannot imagine anything more exotic than that! Have a thought for Tom Yam, A Thai soup sort of with generous sea food flare but extremely hot! It’s falling in love with food here, Marousia!
Hank