He made a choice
to leave.
He walks with suitcase
on a lead, battered
muddy, frayed airline
barcode still stuck to its handle.
He avoids the biggest potholes
on the road, an avenue
of once-belching factories
now brownfields.
The half-light of the evening,
whispers, ‘find a corner
before it’s too late
draw paper shutters tight’.
Slivers of necessity
push upon his temple.
Snails slither horns erect,
a patch of mustard weed
delicious evening meal
he stops to watch.
He remembers frenzied soldiers
on a spiral staircase.
A stone by a drain grows
four feet and a reptile head,
he shakes his head in disbelief,
listens for the angry wolf.
He trips into a slimy pothole,
hears the lullaby of frogs.
Through a crack crowned
with razor wire, he edges
careful not to break his skin;
a door half open beckons.
Necessity’s bounty provides
refuge for the night.
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September 14th, 2011 at 12:56 pm
Oh! this is heartbreaking!
I was thinking of WWI soldier, shell shock, love shock…it is so evocative of so many possibilities.
Brilliant nonetheless.
Lady Nyo
September 14th, 2011 at 1:00 pm
makes me wonder what is in this guys suitcase…not tryign to be funny but as an extended metaphor for the baggage we carry…esp as his night gets so surreal….
September 14th, 2011 at 1:35 pm
Yes it can be read as an extended metaphor…
September 14th, 2011 at 1:20 pm
A most dark and eerie mood in this one, marousia, some sort of post traumatic shock, for sure, yet he seems to reflect a landscape and world as sick as he is. Fine piece.
September 14th, 2011 at 2:41 pm
This is incredible and somehow feels the weight of life’s burdens carried for years in some of the symbolism. Very well written…very…I think so many of us carry a lot into these kinds of emotions, as the world isn’t an easy one…sometimes we think we can carry the weight of the world upon our shoulders…yet as individuals there is the knowledge we can’t fix everything as much as we’d like to…there is so much in this in every form…and as always so descriptive we can see the visions surrounding his world….excellent
September 14th, 2011 at 6:09 pm
I’ve been waiting for you to write this one ~ & now, five minutes after reading it, I can feel your poem still pulsing inside me. Your opening words drew me in immediately: ‘he made a choice to leave’ … and despite all the incredible imagery in your poem it is that first line that resonates. ‘Did he?’ I keep asking myself, ‘did he really have a choice?’ This is an incredibly powerful poem and it is one which I wish I owned in a book so that I might keep coming back to it. It intrigues me and touches me deeply. I wonder if you could be persuaded to include it in the Grass Roots book? Having said that I believe this poem would stand more than a fighting chance in any top-drawer poetry competition. Absolutely wonderful write Marousia.
September 14th, 2011 at 8:34 pm
Haha I have already emailed for inclusion in the Grass Roots anthology
Thank you so much for your comments. I am delighted to have struck a raw nerve with this one.
September 14th, 2011 at 9:14 pm
It’s left me breathless.
September 15th, 2011 at 12:36 am
I can’t believe how long it took me to actually start reading your blog! So glad I’m here now. Your words evoke entire Worlds.
September 15th, 2011 at 12:01 pm
Thank you for visiting
September 15th, 2011 at 4:27 am
The reader is troubled from the start. Interesting that you call the poem Slivers of Necessity and then at the end you mention Necessity’s Bounty. Irony, I suppose. What baggage we all carry. Beautifully done, M.!
September 15th, 2011 at 5:04 am
Necessity is wedded to time
Ananke and Khronos
Weaving our fates
Rolling our lives
Into coils of Razor wire
Yet I choose to see it differently
I see three sisters
Older than time
Tired of endless days
They close their eyes tightly
Their sighs long for surcease
Yet we show them our lives
That repeat so endlessly
Continuous spirals of continuity
That drive the fates to madness
They turn their vision to the sun
Our lives spin heedlessly on
Eggshell lives of light and yolk
Breaking endlessly to slivers
Shivers of shadowy compulsion
No need to compel obedience
We follow our downward path
As if our lives depended on it
We know the destination sure
In the river of our scarred lives
Yet these words too are lies
Seeking to trap and ensnare
I too look at the sun
Its’ brightness burns with truth
More painful than darkness
Yet I cannot look away
For ensnared by this vision
I am surely lost
To the shades of dark
That would claim my soul
yamabuki
Thanks for your poem
Such extraordinary words
Of dark inspiration
Deeply bow I
To your spirit
September 15th, 2011 at 12:02 pm
I bow to you – you honour me deeply
September 15th, 2011 at 11:10 am
your blog is simply amazing and I am so glad I have found it here and reading your poem I can not wait to read more as the time goes by thank you so much
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/13/a-new-life-begins/
September 15th, 2011 at 12:01 pm
Thank you for coming
September 15th, 2011 at 5:47 pm
beautiful images……I like the pot hole analogy… This is not related but I once had a daily commute of about 25 miles through deep, deep woods of Arkansas. There was a spot on that journey, possibly a small pond or body of water hidden, where the sound of small frogs chirping, not croaking but chirping, just absolutely filled the air… There must have been thousands and thousands of them… I looked forward to passing that spot everyday because that sound was like a chorus, angelic…… not like any other frogs I’ve ever heard…. Your lullaby of frogs just totally took me there……
September 17th, 2011 at 10:08 am
So pleased to have triggered a memory for you
September 15th, 2011 at 8:05 pm
fheww… read these slivers several times… slimy… still stuck to me.
“A stone by a drain grows”
great imagery, choice of words… Thank you!
~deb
September 15th, 2011 at 10:41 pm
You are a master of imagery my friend, this piece no exception. Pulled in and carried me through to end wonderfully. ~ Rose
September 16th, 2011 at 2:40 am
This has some spectacular imagery!
September 16th, 2011 at 7:50 am
great poetry, Marousia. The suitcase is an excellent figurative object
September 18th, 2011 at 9:12 am
Harrowing story!
September 20th, 2011 at 1:58 am
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